hi jenny - sorry i couldn't make it to class tonight, i would have liked to see these printed out!
the overall feel of the front cover is pretty spot-on, and i like the contrast of the front with the back - still not entirely sure of the exact image of the red but i think i'd have to see it in person.
i don't mind the first 2 fonts for the "for emma" - i think what's throwing me off more is the placement so deliberately in those light patches. seems kind of forced and awkward. maybe just try to run it in a line or 2 somewhere in the dark areas. i definitely like the bon iver font, but not sure it's quite the right shade - seems like it was cut and pasted from something else. maybe play around with the eyedropper a bit.
hi jenny -
ReplyDeletesorry i couldn't make it to class tonight, i would have liked to see these printed out!
the overall feel of the front cover is pretty spot-on, and i like the contrast of the front with the back - still not entirely sure of the exact image of the red but i think i'd have to see it in person.
i don't mind the first 2 fonts for the "for emma" - i think what's throwing me off more is the placement so deliberately in those light patches. seems kind of forced and awkward. maybe just try to run it in a line or 2 somewhere in the dark areas. i definitely like the bon iver font, but not sure it's quite the right shade - seems like it was cut and pasted from something else. maybe play around with the eyedropper a bit.
i think you're on your way - keep going!